not bad

Given from a normal stand point, this wasn't a bad flash all in all. It probably would mean more to me if i was an avid reader of drow tales, which honestly i can't say ive heard of before now.

Ok, as far as graphics go, it was smooth and well animated. Yes, as people have said, it takes its look/feel from an anime sort of perspective, which is most likely what they were shooting for. It comes off very well, and looked great, although there really wasnt alot of movement, and at times people seemed like they were kind of stiff, but not bad at all.

As far as sound goes, you really shouldn't have had the people talking during the report, it got it really confusing because there was a bit too much to listen to. The voice acting was pretty decent, as far as flash animations go, probably some of the best ive seen(heard :P) in a while. However, some of the voices on different characters seemed almost like they were the same, im assuming the same person did them because they were so similar. So you may want to change that up a bit.

Ok, now for story, as i said, im not familiar with drow tales, so the story seemed a bit confusing to me, and some jokes didnt seem to make sense, seems like there's alot of inside jokes going on. That makes your flash specific to one onset of audience, and kind of alienates everyone else, something you may want to avoid.

Overall, not a bad flash, great graphics, good sound, bit confusing story, you get an 8 overall that you earned everybit of

not bad

I understand that this is your first flash, so obviously it wont be perfect, but that having been said, overall it wasnt that bad.

Graphics looked good, but movement was a bit clunky.

Sound was great, it definately made the flash more than anything.

as far as story, well, its obvious there wasnt supposed to be much of a "story" per se, however, im not sure where the whole "incompetent" part comes in, he seemed to handle himself very well :P

Overall not a bad flash, hopefully you learned something from it and will produce better ones in the future

okay

Well, as almost everyone has said, it's obvious your animations was somehow inspired by david firth and his various series of flash animations. Ok, lets start with the good. As far as graphics, i think that your animation was very fluid and well put together, you defiantely have that going for you.

Sound department, however, was ever so lacking. The voices were hard to understand at times, which actually goes with this genre of animation style, however if yor going to make it hard to understand, you should have captions

Story is where it falls flat. There was really no complexity, nor a makes you think kind of attitude it should. It was rather cut and dry. It seems it was just based on cruelty towards the woman. And when you have to explain in your definition of the film WHO the main character is, then your film is too shallow in its story parts, as the story should show who your main character is.

Overall, you get a 6, not great, not horrible, but you should really use this as a learning experience and rethink your methods. I hope to see more from you, and hopefully you will have increased your abilities and learned new things

eh..

Meh, not that fun of a game really, not much to it. Saw something just like it online in java quite sometime back, so no originality points either. Overall i give it a 3, rather limited in what to do, and just plain not too fun